{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"7737453","dateCreated":"1229012591","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"radami73","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/radami73","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/johnladdsep.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/7737453"},"dateDigested":1531976625,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Excellent","description":"Overall this is an excellent essay! The thesis is clear and the paper never strays from the topic.  It is well organized with transitions and topic sentences for every paragraph.  The reader never gets lost in following the path of the essay.  I really enjoyed the paragraphs about the Mariner and the Wedding Guest.  The comparison is very precise and leads to well articulated conclusions.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nBut of course you want some suggestions :)<br \/>\nFor the introduction I would suggest not diving right into a quote, include Coleridge's first name and maybe say something more to introduce him.  I think you could expand on the Kubla Khan part as well. Finally, I think it might be interesting to include support quotes and outside sources for the affects of opium and drugs.  You use outside sources when explaining parts of Coleridge's poems but don't really use them when making a claim about drugs. <br \/>\n<br \/>\nJust some thoughts! This is a great essay to use here!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"7735907","dateCreated":"1229010835","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"cbly94","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/cbly94","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/johnladdsep.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/7735907"},"dateDigested":1531976625,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Job well done","description":"Dearest John Ladd-<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI think you chose the perfect essay to showcase here. The way in which you write is intriguing and the essay itself kept me interested the entire time. Every point you stated is backed up by evidence that makes this a great essay. Job well done John Ladd! :]<br \/>\n<br \/>\nAll my love-<br \/>\nCait","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"7735049","dateCreated":"1229009853","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2008","userCreated":{"username":"jstorrelli","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jstorrelli","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/johnladdsep.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/7735049"},"dateDigested":1531976626,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Great Essay","description":"John, <br \/>\nThis was some really good stuff.  I loved the quotes you selected from the poem and was impressed by the support you drummed up from Younquist.  I also was a fan of some of the language with words like gilded and elided.  Definitely a keeper!<br \/>\n<br \/>\nJohn Milton...err...Torrelli","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}